I have an iPhone app whose App Store listing needs a quick language pass. The task is limited to the short marketing description plus the text that appears on five screenshots. Everything is already drafted; I simply need a native-level reviewer to read what’s there, flag any unnatural phrasing, and suggest smooth, idiomatic alternatives so the copy sounds as though it were written locally rather than translated. What you’ll hand back: • A marked-up copy of the current description with clear revisions. • Corrected text for each screenshot caption, keeping within the same character limits. • A brief note (one or two sentences per change) explaining any stylistic decisions—this helps me keep the voice consistent on future updates. The whole exercise should take no more than twenty minutes for someone fluent and detail-oriented, and I’ll be ready to approve immediately after review.